THE MESSAGE

Down the corridor,

Second on the left

Tea's in the cupboard

Sugars on the shelf.

The cup's on the sink,

Spoons are in the draw

and the milk I think

Is in the fridge door.

So just boil the kettle,

My place is yours

And I'll be home soon

So greet me at the door.

And later by the fire

We'll share some red wine

And naked with desire

We shall remain entwined.

Reviews

[ANTO]

Im sorry I missed this one Andrew. Its reads not like directions to the kitchen to make tea or coffee but rather instructions for a lifetime love to find happiness in your home and by extension in your heart. With a little earthiness added for good measure.
I really liked this one
Good writing A.
:)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you ANTO

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'THE MESSAGE'
andrew mitchell,
To have a place of belonging is what all humanity desires.
It seems like an unattainable goal when it is not real.
This poem reminds that love is something to be cherished
and treasured.
Great writing.
Kathy

[Rocksie]

I like this it seems so simple at first glance, but more deep and committed when read. I guess that's how life with someone is. It starts out light and easy, then gets deep. And once you find someone who is the right "cup of tea" for you, then life goes by on a happier note. Good write.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you rocksie for your words

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I would be playing that one over and over again :) So sweet and cozy, Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

why thank you lynn

[unfathomd]

I know I'm no match when it comes to your writings lol ;) short.. but perfectly described :D gr8 write :)

[andrew mitchell]

don't you believe it! you are a match for anyone. thanks for your kind words

[zunie frost]

I love the starting 4 lines ! Nicely written

[zunie frost]

I love the starting 4 lines ! Nicely written

[Ruth]

How lovely! I love the softness here and the anticipation...tangible...precious piece! :)

[andrew mitchell]

thank you poppy for your kind words

[Nisreen]

Who wouldn't want for a home in another ..... To come back to your house and not just have complete silence ......

Sweet

[andrew mitchell]

thank you my dear friend

[Kelly Scheppers]

What a lovely Christmas greeting this would be! You have me swooning...and I love it!

[andrew mitchell]

Imagine if santa was real lol! Why is santa always smiling? He knows where all the bad girls live!! ;)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Don't tell anyone!! ; )

[andrew mitchell]

Ok I won't tell anyone, only santa and I know! You're a bad girl!! ssssshhhhhhh!

[jesserose99]

I love this message! It sounds so inviting...how could you not want some of that tea?

[andrew mitchell]

Or later red wine! Thank you for your kind words jesse!:)

[jesserose99]

well exactly, one thing leads to the next it seems Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

lol the progression of the procession! ;)