Everything to You

Tell me your secrets,
your sins,
your hopes,
your story

Tell me your belief,
your joy,
your fear,
your happiness

Tell me your wish,
All of your words shall be mine,
No one shall hear them unless you speak them,
Tell me everything you.

Reviews

[bob, small b. aka invs]

i like the sound of hunger in wanting to hear someone else's thoughts. you express it well. the last line is a bit confusing, though. is there another way this could be said?

[A.A]

Thank you so much and I'll fix that