Her Plight

My favorite subject to write on is Vampires ^^

He watches as her body goes limp

He feels her warmth leave

As he swallows her blood

He didn’t know her

He didn’t care

He just needed to feed

And he wanted a woman

His eyes glow red

As he sits and stares

The night air smells fresh

And he leaves her there

He is gone again

He leaves her alone in the darkness

And walks up the empty street

He smiles and hums a melody 

He knows what he has done

And feels no sympathy or guilt

He feels energized and full

He wants something 

but isn’t sure what

Reviews

[Archia]

I love how the end makes me want to know what is it he wants. I have ideas but it's not absolute. I enjoyed the way you described it.

[Tina Kline]

Excellent vampire poem. He takes what he needs and feels no regret. But why should he, her blood and life is just food to him, a vampire. Very enjoyable poem.

[Marie]

Well, there's certainly no better subject to write on than vampires...