Just Another Pretty Face

A sad story

I have nothing to lose any more. It is all just a big game. I don’t care about what this world wants from me, I don’t need it. I stay to make other lives hard. I make people challenge them selves in ways they never would. I provide competiontion for those who need it. I am the one who is smiling when I lose. I love making people belive they have won. No one evers wins because there is nothing worth winning. There isn’t anything worth fighting for. Love is destroyed in the end. Land is just shared later. Beliefs are disproven. Your own person is just destroyed and betrayed by this society. I know the ones who are broken. I know the dream of those who know nothing more than what they are taught from birth. People just want money, land, love, but in reality what do you get. You could possibly work hard your whole life and never have enough, or you could have to much. You could fall inlove and the same day your are broken hearted drowing your sorrows with a bottle. You could be successful and inlove and have a great life, but what happens at death? It all becomes void. None of it matter. The love you get or give dosnt save you from the angle of death. You can stare death in the face and laugh, but you will never get away. Stories are told about a never ending life, about a heaven, about a 2^nd chance, but they are all just stories, once you die that is it. There isn’t some magical place, or some horrid hole waiting for you. People fear something that isn’t even there. Why fear that when in life things are worst. It just proves life is meaningless to a lot of people. Maybe not their own but others are.

 

Reviews

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

There are some things i agree and there is a few i don't. Yea, we are all going to die, so why not enjoy life while we have it? Why give up before we have even tried? I am not a religious person when i die whatever, i will be dead, but life is very much meaningful. There are so many things that make life so worth it. there are a lot of cons, but the pros can definitely make it bearable. No life is worth living if you don't give it meaning. Not every one is greedy and selfish, there are people that make them the way they are, many people don't give up, and even though it can do nothing but kill you inside, only you can make your life worth it, live it and enjoy it, don't ever let another person steal your happiness.

[Aly]

Truth is I don't even remember this...
Thanks for the feedback though.
I think i wrote it when i was really messed up...
weird

[Clayton Bardwell]

I say, go with the spell checker. It can be your friend:) The spell checker won't catch things like "angle of death". You might have meant angel of death.

The sad part of this story is that someone would feel this way. You're young, I'm old. It's been my experience that life can be wonderful, happy, interesting, and joyful. Yes, bad things happen but you can, given enough time, rise above them.

Love is not always destroyed in the end. Love is worth fighting for. Not everyone is as you have portrayed them. Not everyone is shallow and greedy. Many are, but not all. Your challenge in life is to seek out the good ones and cherish them.

Your writing is compelling. That's why I have commented on it. However, if you want people to read you and believe your story you need to work on the basics, like spelling/spell checker, grammar, structure, etc. The mistakes can be a distraction from what you are trying to get across.

There now, I win:) I feel better all ready.