COLOR BLUE EYES

Love, you ruin the art before you ruined my heart
The loneliness was toxic but so is the love
U only focus on me, I only focus on u
I can't see North or South and there's a tornado coming thru
Clear view, only of you my life it only revolves around you

I used to fight for freedom now it seems I'm bounded
Surrounded by your presence what was once nonsense
Love sick? That doesn't begin to explain it
The best thing to happen to me acts on me like a cancer
Eats my desire, quenches down the fire
All the noise you keep bringing it just sounds like a choir

Singing a chorus

Reviews

[Valeriya Nahirnyak]

When I came here, I came for the title (jiggles), I have blue eyes but this poem oes deeper beyond the appearance. It's about uncorresponded love, isn't it? Love, that priceless angel when corresponded and that non-sleeping devil when uncorresponded.
I loved they way you wrote this, it's like a runing river, every word of it fits perfectly.
Very nice work (:

[Aziz Luther]

Glad you enjoyed the poem. Glad you understood what it meant. Thanks for the review

[Valeriya Nahirnyak]

You're very welcome darling ! (: