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A Poem by Aziz Luther
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In a randomness comes a beautiful thing

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Not a girl next door,
Though I had to move next door to know
The first one made me write this song
The second I kinda dated but not for long
The third I kinda admired from afar
She had the beauty and the smile that was up to par
With my style, my kinda lady
Sweet 100% lady nothing 'bout her shady
I was with another lady but this lady drove me crazy
With a smile persuasive and the look that baited me

So excuse me miss Lisa Jaye
I love you but not all day
Who I love sometimes I don't know, I won't say
So let's just say my mind sometimes wonders away

© 2013 Aziz Luther


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This could make for a lovely song. Your mind wanders about from day to day looking for elusive birds as you admire that pretty little blue jay next door. Don't tell blue jay about your secret obsession to discover her rivals. She had better not find you do-si-doing with that turkey, duck, or wild crow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aziz Luther

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you got the concept of the song. I sincerely appreciate your review. Thank you
Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Now all you need to do is burn that song into wax. They still make those old 45's for those who lik.. read more



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This could make for a lovely song. Your mind wanders about from day to day looking for elusive birds as you admire that pretty little blue jay next door. Don't tell blue jay about your secret obsession to discover her rivals. She had better not find you do-si-doing with that turkey, duck, or wild crow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aziz Luther

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you got the concept of the song. I sincerely appreciate your review. Thank you
Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Now all you need to do is burn that song into wax. They still make those old 45's for those who lik.. read more

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Added on August 18, 2013
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Aziz Luther
Aziz Luther

Phoenix, AZ



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I'm Chris. I have always thought of poetry as painting in words. Giving precise details with a shower of metaphors, taking a reader on a journey, making the reader understand the poet. I have always l.. more..

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