Falling

I thought you would catch me...

You said you’d catch me,

If ever I fall,

So it was surprising,

That you weren’t there at all.

Life’s walls fell upon me,

A choice I did decide,

Everything overwhelming,

...I committed suicide.

But halfway down it hit me—

I didn’t want to die.

But I was already falling,

 What you’d said was a lie. 

Reviews

[TheActOfRandomness(:]

Ooooh I really like that!
Its dark and lovely. :)
You should TOTALLY Become a writer or something, no matter what you say.
You can't put this talent to waste!

[Sheila Marie Carr]

You are such a talented writer and you are becoming another one of my favorites here, again another great write.