Crave

Yearn for your sweet touch
Lust your tender embrace
Crave your luscious lips
Desire your intoxicating breath upon my face

Mold my supple heart like clay
Feeling you now would be ecstasy
Itch for our bodies intertwined
Ache for your amorous, heated intimacy

Long for your impassioned, gentle stroke
That chiseled body, can’t help but stare
Thirst your quenching kiss
Hunger that seductive glare

 

Reviews

[Julio Angel Ortiz]

Short but sweet. You deceptively start off simple in the first stanza and then hit us with some nice imagery in the second ("mold my supple heart like clay" is a brilliant line). The passion and yearning comes off in waves in this poem; love it. Very sensuous in an intelligent way; you opened yourself up here and it pays off in spades. Very, very nicely done.

[Jibey]

The feelings of a lust heart, birning with desire... the desire to feel, the itch for an embrace, the strokes that please

[Light]

oh, what a romantic poem! the lust for "your tender embrace" and the crave for "your luscious lips." giving yourself over to someone else; "mold my heart." i really liked this piece! bellisima!

[Vanesa Markovic]

Poetry like this will be the end of me, truly.
I know this craving all too well.
A beautiful expression of longing, and desire.
A great piece.

[heido]

It's a bit wordy, for the length of the poem.
Crowded but Poinant.
Perhaps the overwhelming words, is supposed to add to the overwhelming emotion of desire?
Nice, but a hard journey to be taken on.

[Iota]

Nice wanting poem, could feel it so it was good.

[Stacey Watts]

Very sweet and erotic. I love the romantic feel of desire in this piece. Well done.

[Sean M. Addams]

wow I really like the passion in this .... a very touching piece.... imagery was done beautifully... overall nice job on this..

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is blissfully erotic with a touch of undeniable passion.
I agree so sexy without being dirty. VERY VERY NICE!!

[Ron Reardon]

Such romance and almost erotic writing, without being rated R...very hot!