Breaking Heart

If I can stop one heart from breaking,
I shall not live in vain;
If I can ease one life the aching,
Or cool one pain,
Or help one fainting robin
Unto his nest again,
I shall not live in vain.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

This was sooo good and inspirational...Bravo..........................

[Moiz Rasheed]

Thank you for reading

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[-Scribe in Style-]

What words! Helping one person, mending one heart, doing one thing right, makes this life well worth living! So very true. I love the simple effectiveness, and good use of repetition. I love how the two ideas have been joined through it.
Help one fainting Robin,
Unto his nest again.
Reminds me of some winters, festive season, when its the season to be jolly, to help people because that's the right thing to do.

[Moiz Rasheed]

Thank u it was me tryng to do the impossible though the last part was taken from another extract ..