just leave

dont tell me 

just dont speak 

as a matter of fact just  leave 

i cant breath 

how could you leave me

you promised 

what about our promises 

i put everything i have.. who am i kidding 

i knew this day would come 

you would always run i would always chase

make everything ohk show you better things

then you run again

make me feel pain once again

well enough dont finish your sentence 

dont try and make feel guilty 

this is all unhealthy

help me  

and leave me

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

this is all unhealthy
help me
and leave me

Poet want other person to leave poet as the relationship caused pain and suffering and turned as a failure, feelings are expressed vividly, enjoyed the poem

[LUSTforlife]

thank you very much (im glad you grasp the concept)

[Linda alexander]

You welcome

[NovaeSpes]

I like this poem a lot!
the line; "
how could you leave me
you promised
what about our promises"
I loved that part a lot, I look forward to reading more of your work! :)

[LUSTforlife]

thank you trust me when i say i enjoy reading your work also

[Jared Grace]

Great poem, it seems the persona's a bit double minded. He/ She's fed up but at the same time can't quite let go.

[LUSTforlife]

yes exactly and thank you

[NeoSam]

Please share some romantic poems ... because before the breakup there must be some good memories read morePlease share some romantic poems ... because before the breakup there must be some good memories
Thanks you
-Neo

[LUSTforlife]

you'll see some love in my next poem