Your Love

Your Love

A Poem by alternative_be
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Another translation of a poem I wrote at the age of 15 ...

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Your love
 
Passing by like time
Minutes, seconds, nanoseconds
Quickly, volatile as ether can be
 
Your kisses,
Hot
Fire from hell
 
Promises carried away by the wind
Words as unpredictable as the weather
Charming as a mousetrap
Why am I …
Your little mouse?

© 2009 alternative_be


Author's Note

alternative_be
No ratings, because this is another excerpt of my teenage poetry ...

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Your kisses,
Hot
Fire from hell.. no ratings.. ok

Posted 14 Years Ago
Goed geschreven, vooral als je nagaat dat je toen pas 15 was! Misschien is het leuk om de Nederlandse versie ook te plaatsen..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LoL I actually got a giggle out of it...reminds me of something.
Dark & Delightful (I know, but sometimes there is humor in dark
for whatever reason). I think this is well written for a teenager!!
Well written, period. Thank You for sharing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Somewhere in the country ..., Belgium



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Dear all, I'm a 46 year old woman living in Europe. My passions are: reading, writing, poetry, blogging, languages, nature, walking, making friends. Curious? Who am I? You can read it all in th.. more..

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