Vicious

Just describing my current state of mind

 

Vicious

 

Veil of tears flowing

In my stream of consciousness

Can this go on running endlessly

In my broken mind?

On second thought, right now, I am

Unaware of my once much praised capacities

So it is in my wandering state of mind.

Author's Note

At the moment I feel like an underachiever...

Reviews

[Dizzy-Izzy]

This poem does not reflect the thoughts of an underachiever... These are the introspective thoughts of a poet... the one we all know you are. Confidence comes and goes, sometimes by the hour. Productivity? Depends on the day and what one considers productive. Today for me, it was the domestic front that received attention... yesterday it was my book.

Your inspiration will return. You probably already know where to find it and when you're ready, it will be there waiting for you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I've been there... we can feel like little despite our past accomplishments when our current state feels stale... we just have to remember life has its moments and we roll with it. Nicely written.

[Jinx's Heart]

It's very nice! Not all poems need to be long. A lot are one sentence long. I like the simple form and simple concept. Nice work.