Bluntly (reflections of the shrimp, part 2)

Previously I wrote a poem called 'the shrimp', which is autobiographical (call this part 2)... Quite recently, I seriously started thinking about what my chances would be, if I were to change careers ... Then by chance, I read James Blunt's biography on W

 

Bluntly ...

(reflections of the shrimp, part 2)

 

Joanna, little as she is, is

As said before, born as a shrimp into this world

Merrily reading Wikipedia in

English, browsing for ‘James Blunt’

She does not really know

 

But soon she is to find out

Loud and clear, it is to be found right

Under her

Nose: it is never too late

To bluntly change carreers!

Author's Note

This is the link to the first 'shrimp' poem:
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/alternative_be/237606/
In case you would want to read the Wikipedia article:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/James_Blunt

Reviews

[Michael]

Nice work. I would not make it so obvious that it is an acrostic. It takes the joy of discovery away. I know some would not get it but, hey that is what makes acrostics special.

I do see one small nit: carreers should be careers.

[Gandré]

this is playful and sweet! hmm we know who J Blunt is..
but this is even better ! amazing, I never could do something like this
I have to create freely just free imagination, never could do acrostic... meaning...
love, l. gandr�