Hold On To Me

No matter what you do or say

I'll never leave you, just cannot leave

Another man behind my back would certainly be a knife in the heart

But I would forgive you cause no matter what I’ll always love you

It’s not that I won’t lose my mind or we won’t have couple of fights

It’s not that I won’t be hurt or wonder if I’m not good enough

But I don’t care as long as we’re together

I don’t care cause I know we’ll find a way to get through

 

And I’ll try my very best to keep myself together

And I’ll hold on to you whatever happens

But would you hold on to me

 

Do whatever you want to do

I’ll hold on tight whatever it is

But say that you’ll hold on to me

Say that you’ll hold on to me

That’s all I need from you

 

If you could open up my head and see

You'd understand that leaving you wouldn't happen

I love you so much more than love I  just cannot live without you

A big mistake or a simple one won’t make any difference to me

Cause in the end I know I’ll be with you

I know I might get hurt sometimes and even have a rain of tears

But I don’t care as long as our path is one

I don’t care cause you're worth everything

 

I’ll try my very best to forgive you always

And that’s because I don’t want to lose you

But would you forgive me too

 

Do whatever you want to do

I’ll hold on tight whatever it is

But say that you’ll hold on to me

Say that you’ll hold on to me

That’s all I need from you

 

I'm always afraid you might want to leave someday 

But I promise you that I’ll try my best not to make a single mistake

I promise you that I’ll please you and give you the best I can

 

So

Say that you’ll hold on to me

Say that you’ll always love me

Say that you’ll take care of me

Say that you’ll never leave me

That’s all I need from you

Reviews

[Rachelle]

To love is always to run the risk of pain. That is the sad reality of it. While we can give ourselves to full devotion to our beloved, there is no guarantee that such would be reciprocated in quantity and quality. We open ourselves. We are vulnerable. We fear that such a commitment is not returned. To risk revealing all the insecurities and qualms in a relationship takes some courage. To face it, even more.

[Helena]

Penned by a man deeply committed to his love.
Very sweet and heartfelt. A lovely read!
Keep writing these lovely treasures...

Helena

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Very beautiful center on the commitment of true love. Love that has a determination within it to fight off the gates of hell. This is "In sickness and in health" . True love has an eternal commitment. This is the type of love the Angles fight to defend. Good write my friend.

[darkgurl]

I like this alot, this i very well written, can feel this write and can hear it as a song.

[Berserker[Diktator Von ..]

Wow...I love this piece as well..You really do have a talent for writing...I hope that you do not give that up..for it would be a shame...Great job and keep up the great work!

Your friend,
Berserk