Signs

 

Baby I’m trapped in your flames of fire

I’m burning oh I must have you now

These lips I need to taste

This skin I need to touch

No more reality just fantasy on my mind

I’m losing control

 

So won’t you throw your signs on me

Make me feel everything’s alright

To make everything right tonight

Won’t you give me some sugar I like

Make me flaming as fire and I’ll burn you with me

 

The night is about to end and you’re still innocent

Just reveal the wild side you have don’t be shy

Let your words be as your skin

And your style be as your lips

Believe me then fantasy will turn to reality

And we’ll lose control together till the morning light

 

So won’t you throw your signs on me

Make me feel everything’s alright

To make everything right tonight

Won’t you give me some sugar I like

Make me flaming as fire and I’ll burn you with me

Reviews

[Berserker[Diktator Von ..]

Have you ever listen to Tarkan...this sounds a lot like his music....He is a Turkish singer....You really do have a gift and talent for writing..I applaude you...as always you did a great job with this piece...keep it up and you will go far...=)

[Fran Marie]

So won't you throw your signs on me
Make me feel everything's alright
To make everything right tonight
Won't you give me some sugar I like
Make me flaming as fire and I'll burn you with me

A very well crafted piece~ quite lyrical with cadence spot on~ nicely penned~Fran Marie

[darkgurl]

WOW! This is just awesome here, I can hear this as a song, very well written.

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Very artistic expressions. Good job on the flow. Though enticing in fantasy in real life it seldom pays off to move this fast.