Two Spoons of Sugar

Two Spoons of Sugar

A Poem by Kal

Lately

You have been acting with me strangely

Like you’re no longer my lady

Treating me like I’m nobody

That’s too sour for me!

 

Slavery

Is that your new way to control me?

Making me run after you like a little doggy

Is that your way with me to be nasty?

Where has the sweetness gone?!

 

I need two spoons of sugar

In this black romance of yours

And I think I’ll survive the rest of the day

Only two spoons of sugar

To be able to drink that coffee you have made

And I think I’ll be able to survive

 

Maybe

It’s some kind of game you’re playing with me

Don’t mind as long as you play it as a sweetener

Transforming everything you touch into some candy

Turn my fantasy into reality!

 

Will you?

Or you just like to torture me like a prisoner

Or to be your pet your slave or even a shoe

To wear me out and act as if I’m nothing to you

Is there any sugar left in you?!

 

I need two spoons of sugar

In this black romance of yours

And I think I’ll survive the rest of the day

Only two spoons of sugar

To be able to drink that coffee you have made

And I think I’ll be able to survive

© 2015 Kal


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Kal
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I agree with one of the reviewers below. This definitely seems like a song to me, and my favorite part is the part that I would see as the chorus: the stanza that begins with "I need two spoonfuls of sugar". Nice job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kal

9 Years Ago

Thank you..
Enjoyed the coffee reference. Keep writing :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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KJ
I like this because I can totally envision it as a rap song (whether or not you feel that way). I like they lyrics and they would fit right into a rap. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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