Opening the blinds.

Some days facing depression seems unbearable.

Here I stand.

A broken soul.

No one to raise or call my own.

No heart to love or open to

any human old or new.

Here i sit, 

A mind of clutter.

with feelings closed,

a broken shutter.

No light shall enter,

no hope seems near,

today could be the last, i fear.

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

Wow..this could've gone on longer and still hold its brilliance, so much to work with.
Depression is life-sucking and brutal to bear...writes like this, and the feedback therein, can definitely help!

Thanks so much for sharing this

[Sami Khalil]

The title was good , the usage of color to highlight certain words was good and the ending was good. The whole was great...:)

[Taylorgwebb]

Very moving and well put. I look forward to more of your writing.

[Dhaye]

So moving, Aly. Depression is lethal but I hope you survive in this struggle.
Writing is therapy. Keep writing.
Nice job here.

[Jordan Williams]

i liked the touch you added of putting "heart" and "light" in color. it left me wanting more though