morning pain

#10

ive been waking up,

feeling hard as a stone,

all my muscles hurt,

strait to the bone,

 

im not sick with fever,

im sick because of you,

your not here,

and i dont know what to do,

 

i wake with pain,

of miss you,

but the days are shorter,

time just flew,

 

we use to be,

always together,

distance cant change that,

we're friends forever,

 

you stole my breath,

as you walked by,

the beauty of you,

put a tear in my eye,

 

now i cant breathe,

you stole my hair,

i need you,

because i know you care,

 

but when i wake up,

and your not here,

my pain gets worse,

for my life i fear,

 

when we reunite,

my pain will flee,

im not alone,

cause your with me.<3

Reviews

[Arthur Crow]

The anguish in these lines is very moving and real… you bleed a lot of emotion with skill. Really enjoyed it. Thanks!

[KayDennyy!(:]

Omg, this put a tear in my eye.