waiting on a letter.

for the two most important people in my life<3

She's only 17,

And yet, she's already seen it all.

All of it,

She all ready knows how to fall,

In love she waits.

 

Waiting on a letter,

From you Bestfriend,

Its been too long,

Though ill wait till the end.

 

She's sitting on her porch,

Looking for the mail,

She'll wait through anything,

Rain, Snow, Sleet, And hail.

 

She's only 17,

And yet, she's already been through it all.

All of it,

She's waiting on faits call,

In love she waits.

 

Waiting on a letter,

From you baby boy,

It's been too long,

When its in my hands ill feel joy.

 

She's sitting on her porch,

Looking for the mail,

She'll wait through anything,

Rain, Snow, Sleet, And hail.

 

She's only 17,

And yet, she's already seen it all.

All of it,

She all ready knows how to fall,

In love she waits.

Author's Note

<3

Reviews

[Jenny-Jen-Jen]

I could imagine this as a Taylor Swift song, to be honest. And I'm not in any way saying that that is a bad thing-- it's actually rather good. It shows a little bit of honesty in young love that lately, in our generation, is hard to find. Excellent writing.

[Michael X]

this is heartfelt and beautifully expressed to such, the reader can't help
but feel the real, sincere naure of the vision, to love and to have lost,
this poem represents the epitomy of missing someone that is close to the
heart, and at the same time expresses itself as a learning and growing
experience by the way you've reciprocated the age as if its a notion to
understanding, a brilliant effect, an all togther excellent job on this.

[KayDennyy!(:]

Omg, i love this, its really showing the emotion on how special it is to get letters, even though its old fashioned!