No one knows how i feel for you.

No one knows how i feel for you.

A Poem by AllyKinzz:)
"

Shawn P. Watts<3

"

days are so long

nights get so cold

im glad i listened

to what i was told.

 

my bestfriend told me i would really like you

but she never knew

how much i all ready do.

 

people question me with looks

i just blow them off though

they say such harsh things

i shrug and say "so".

 

surprised ya did i?

that was the plan

imma stick with you

as long as i can.

 

baby boy you need to know

youve been there for me

for as long as i can remember

now ill be there for you so you can see,

YOU MEAN SO MUCH TO ME

ILL WAIT FOR YOU

TILL THE END OF TIME.<3

© 2010 AllyKinzz:)


Author's Note

AllyKinzz:)
<3 ITS HARD.....

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i've noticed that your poems carry this weird essence of sincerity, and it just pours out from every word. i therefore conclude it's all an output of what you're actually going through right now, or just that you're great at creating different, real personalities. either way, this is a good piece, and you're a good writer. keep it up. (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow, that is really good, i mean it, because i usually judge a writing by the
opening and ending, here the ending was off the charts, the beginning worked
sentimentally as well. the entire poem shows a brilliant expression of adoration.
you have talent, keep up the great work

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awh this is so very cute

Posted 14 Years Ago



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