Important

What is important to you?

Music is my escape; my everything

Trust; one has to earn it

 

Love is a blessing; a gift

Friends; they are hard to find and keep

 

God hasn't saved me, but I still believe

Warmth can come in so many different forms

 

Energy; where does one find it

Strength is aquired with everyday activities

 

Brothers/ sisters may be a hand full, but are always there

Life; although it may be rough, we still need to go through it.

Reviews

[Amit Parmessur]

Good one:

Brothers/ sisters may be a hand full, but are always there

as best part.

:)

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

Important message hidden in each line, great way to make it come alive =)

[TheFemininePad]

Beautiful and very well done. I think you did a great job here. I really like the structure you chose for this poetry. It conveys so many meanings, and it flows very naturally. Great job!

[Robin]

I think this is very well done.. your words were perfect.. I love how you said "God hasnt saved me, but i still believe" very relatable

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem as well. I think you did a nice job on this. I think many things are important to me...I know my friends are important, and writing is always going to be important to me...because it helps me escape. Thanks for sharing.