Sleep

Sleep

A Poem by Ally
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some-what funny

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I cannot sleep no matter how hared I try

I think I'll stay awake until the day I die

 

I tried those pills in that drawr

I'm still awake to the core

 

Don't be fooled by my droopy eyes

It's just another one of those "white" lies

 

I need some help, what do I do

You can't help me for you are sleeping too

 

I have done everything but count sheep

I already know that it won't help me sleep

 

1...2...3...4...5...ZzZzzz

© 2011 Ally


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Not being able to sleep sucks, but the hallucination when your so tired and just cant sleep can be fun as hell....just thought id throw that out there xD

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this. Great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Okay this piece made me laugh. The ending did anyway. Nice write. I like the rhythm and flow. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Ally
Ally

Keyport, NJ



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