Is fear of being alone what human beings dread most? Perhaps, but I spend a lot of time by myself, and it hardly terrifies me.
Of course, what's probably meant by "being alone" in this context, is not having a love interest who cares deeply for you; constantly needs to be in your company; wants to please you.
That, I think, is a legitimate fear; maybe, even, the worst fear.
Your poem, Allie, dramatically explores fear and the disruptive effect it can have on people--especially if we allow it to rule our lives.
Worthwhile work, young poetess.
Is fear of being alone what human beings dread most? Perhaps, but I spend a lot of time by myself, and it hardly terrifies me.
Of course, what's probably meant by "being alone" in this context, is not having a love interest who cares deeply for you; constantly needs to be in your company; wants to please you.
That, I think, is a legitimate fear; maybe, even, the worst fear.
Your poem, Allie, dramatically explores fear and the disruptive effect it can have on people--especially if we allow it to rule our lives.
Worthwhile work, young poetess.
It ongoing metaphor is fear in dressing, yes? It's fabulous. I wish someone would sketch the "one cup that stole...coffee" and that one smile at a passerby. I also wish you utilized some verse structure. But no biggie. Just my preferences.
Good work here, fear both a motivator, a violator, and a villain. You capture that well here. I like the last line, with the word 'alone' sitting by itself with only the period to keep it company. The comfort of it all ending, is all that can keep us company. That is how I saw it at least, which is one of the great joys of poetry I think. The reader can personalize the message.