Paint Me

my love

You paint me

With every color

You can't see

I dance in your pallet

Your love trances me

There are no shades of grey

It is as simple as

A rainbow breeze

I love you.

Author's Note

a poem for my lovely boy

Reviews

[MOON]

Beautiful heartfelt tribute.

[Layla J Omorose]

Awwww so sweet. Nice poem

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Kind and sweet words leading the reader to good and wonderful places. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[forevermore1218]

this is really nice and poetic for something so small. I think that means and shows alot.

Great job dude :)

[Rusty]

Very nice. Happy he must be. What a joy you are in to write this!

[Remember Courage]

It was a nice poem, I really liked the scheme of colors the title was a perfect match. well done.
-Courage

[OctoberDawn]

Very nice, the flow of the poem really conveys the smoothness and beauty of the colors of the rainbow.

[Wild Willow Blue]

Very well written and colorful. Nice work.

[The Empty Hour Glass]

A combination arts! Splendid! This tells me a story of the captivator becoming captivated - and it's surely a wonderful tale! Great job with the structure and overall theme, or message, of the work. Good work!