Paint Me

Paint Me

A Poem by allie_arrowz
"

my love

"
You paint me

With every color

You can't see

I dance in your pallet

Your love trances me

There are no shades of grey

It is as simple as

A rainbow breeze

I love you.

© 2012 allie_arrowz


Author's Note

allie_arrowz
a poem for my lovely boy

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Simple and beautiful. Sometimes poems work best that way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loving work to a special someone, honest and nothing if forced or pushed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully painted my friend......Whisk

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ew! I hate these lovey-dovey things but this one really shook me up! That's a nice one! So much expressed in a few little lines!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this poem haha. It's short but it's really sweet and right to the point.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awwww dis poem is really sweet ... lucky boy

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heartfelt and nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lucky boy lol

I love "I dance in your pallet" love is very vibrant and can't be ignored easily, nor is it simply one color. I like "rainbow breeze" but maybe not in this poem... I'd take out the last three lines, personally, but in the end it is always up to the writer :) thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 16, 2012
Last Updated on June 19, 2012
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