Sailing

dum diddy dum dum

I went sailing on the seas,

I sailed underwater,

and through the trees.

I went sailing on the seas,

and found what i was looking for,

I found myself,

Drifting through the breeze.

I was free, I was free

Author's Note

let me know what you think :)

Reviews

[Revery]

Whoa, very tight in verse and meaning excellent enjoyable write. Got drawn in quickly, got held and loved every bit of it.

[eglantine]

I like the idea/image of sailing underwater, immediately followed by through the trees.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a soaring joy here, as if those sails became wings... How I miss the sea and know too well the depth of freedom it brings... A playful, wondrous glimpse of life lived to its fullest!

[victoria]

hope you still are... nice write

[Kyle]

This sounds like a Beatles song with the quirky, yet interesting lines...i like it.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Cute,
Short,
Well constructed
Said you want to be free
You found yourself
And you list the places where you looked.
A fun write
Thank you
----- John

[Octob3r Star]

Sounds accomplished? Free spirited.

[Harmonica winds]

This is really good, I enjoyed this, It's light and airy.