Sight

What can you see?

Eyes looking to you Senses forced to be renewed Dont you feel ashamed You dont wish to share a name Guilt ruined sleep People acting as sheep Try to stand alone Only to be told you'll never find a home Standing on one side Those who only believe the lie Blind eyes truly see What those with sight will never supersede

Author's Note

This is my very first poem. It just kind of popped into my head one late night a few months ago. Hope you enjoy!

Reviews

[Mysty Johnson]

I quite enjoyed this. For your first poem it is a lovely effort. I can't choose a set of lines as my favorite.... I quite like them all and think they all work together to enhance each other. I quite like the title too. It fits well. Very beautiful imagery throughout the poem. Thank you for sharing. Hope you write more.

[Anand Sehgal]

Guilt ruined sleep
People acting as sheep
Try to stand alone
Only to be told you'll never find a home- Lovely imagery. Enjoyed the piece :)

[Tiffany M. Sinclair]

Awesome, Poem. I love it!

[Allison Price]

Thank you! Its my very first poem, so I am glad that you enjoyed it!

[Tiffany M. Sinclair]

That's really cool I wrote my very first poem yesterday. It just popped into my head to. I wasn't going to write it down. But I found this site. So I decided to sign up and write it out.