Last Goodbye

Last Goodbye

A Poem by Lion's Roar
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Just a really short poem explaining how I feel..

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Your words f*****g hurt,
They feel like a million knifes stabbing through my paper heart.
My heart's bleeding, oozing out blood,
But who cares? You surely don't

It only takes a few more words to leave your mouth,
before I burst, before I explode and take this loaded gun to my head..

© 2015 Lion's Roar


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This is short and really gives off a lot of emotion. I usually am not one for cursing but in your case it's warranted. I really feel your pain and anger. Great poem! Feel free to send me more requests! And hopefully you feel better :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Gee
Jeez,you're a wee bit cheesed off!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on January 14, 2015
Last Updated on December 24, 2015
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Lion's Roar
Lion's Roar

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