Like a Wave in the Ocean

I am like a wave in the ocean,

When happy, I will send gentle waves moving in calm motion,

But during rough, rainy days,

My waves will push against rocks,

While making scary noises as lightning shocks,

As I am angered,

I can send great tides,

That crash on shore and that collides,

Anything as simple but yet beautiful and lovely,

Can have so much power and show so much anger and emotion.

I am like a wave in the ocean

Author's Note

Please be honest, and tell what you think of it. It's my first time writing poetry, so sorry if it's like crap...

Reviews

[Skylar Valentine]

"Anything as simple but yet beautiful and lovely, Can have so much power and show so much anger and emotion(.)" - I loved this line, and case in point to what I say next. Use of comas can not be understated. If used here. It would add a final punch to your closing line. Lovely write :)

[Emily]

I love how you compare yourself to a ocean! Keep ot up!

[Aguilar]

This is great I can totally see imagery in your poem and it's not crap it's good thank for sharing :)