the living

The living               By:Cassie phillips 

 

Chapter 1

 

The world is getting colder and colder, deeper and deeper. Time freezes every .1 miliseconds. It’s insane to think we are getting better But truthly we are in a dark whole.

 

This is the time to start new I’m thinking over and over. Maybe we can do this all over again ? But I’m so paranoid that I don’t know what I’m thinking.

 

I’v made the biggest mistake in my life. I destroyed man kind. To believe that I can do that  Is amazing to me cause that means I can see if I can do anything else.

 

Yes you’re a luntic to thinking losing men is amazing. But ladies that means we can be the leaders now. But im kidding we didn’t lose man kind. I lost my brother and my dad’s man card.

 

Yes that might be a little silly but when you want to do something to your dad so badly but get your brother gets in the situation is brillant! Now they both can deal with their problem’s together.

 

I bet you really want to know what I did to make him lose his man card? Well this is the truth and nothing but the truth. I was wanting to go get my nails done, and my dad can’t stand the smell of nails so what I told him if he follow’s my rule’s today i would drive him to go to te superbowl.

 

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Strange, quite different than the usual dark fantasy I'd prefer to read; but still all the more entertaining.
Clever and silly thoughts expressed nicely through a pen? Just lovely.
Keep it up.

[CHRIS ANDES]

haha, ironically good writing
...silly thoughts
=]

[JRB]

nice write keep up the work