a verse from my second book...

a vrese from my second book The Opposite Of Magic

When the truth will be revealed,

but the guilt cannot be sealed.

When the memories cannot be hidden,

and the joy will be forbidden.

Then a hope will be around,

then new legend will be found,

then new truth will change the story,

and Eol will feel the glory...

Author's Note

I'd like to know your opinion about anything concerning this verse...;)

Reviews

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[Cherrie Palmer]

I enjoyed this round robyn of events that shows both sides of a splash in time.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

I am afraid I am a bit inept at this one in that I do not know the reference of Eol - perhaps you can Enlighten me. Otherwise, I find the meter and message in this work to be delightful and uplifting in many ways. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Light,
Siddartha