Debra’s Rise

from where she came

Debra’s Rise

on a rise to be you

grit climbs like an open wing

dashed, feeling blue could

sing you away but hey

you gonna stay rising

on plateau’s dream of women

see me now

heading my way in a steam!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

My pleasure John!

I AM LIT!

regards,
al

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words, sweet, kind and wonderful. Thank you Alfred for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Lynn!

She’s the love of my life, found her by not looking!

Regards,
Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Jacob!

Brutal upbringing, yet kind, caring, loving along with beautiful kids.

Regards,
Al

[Lyn Anderson]

Women do have that tenacity, the under grit people on the surface associate with men, but in reality, women are built to rise above it ... beautifully said.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but she sings her way back...and women will rise...will always be stronger than we men, in the end.
They rule...as some say...as men Drool....

j.