Teddy Bear Soul

Teddy Bear Soul

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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don't you get it

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Teddy Bear Soul




A Huge Teddy Bear in the room


Panda in nature


Smile & bow


Fools among us large & small


imagine the soul hugging Panda’s code



Here in Neverland 


you can never be sure


Who hugs who


but friendly seems to be the 


the name of the game

© 2018 Alfred Kukitz


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Thanks Margie!

My little evolution into childhood is a wish that it could have been much better.

Regards,
Al

Posted 6 Years Ago


I’m not sure where you’re going with this message, but it reminds me of my younger days, when people were more touchy-feely, & hugs were passed around freely. I love the title of your poem & it’s the perfect phrase to describe the kind of person you probably are – a big ole teddy bear! It’s a great way to describe the kind of people who are just cuddly in their way of being, even if you’ve never seen such a person face-to-face, some people just deliver hugs with their overall attitude in life. That’s what your poem conjures up in me! (((HUGS))) Fondly Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks Doodley,

Way off kiddo! No politics whatsoever. Simply the joy of childhood! Where's your Teddy Bear guy?

regards,
al

Posted 6 Years Ago


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6 Years Ago

Ahh. I see. Maybe that's why i missed the mark. Never was a Teddy Bear guy in my youth! Well.....eve.. read more
Alfred Kukitz

6 Years Ago

and surely you are the best!
Thanks Redzone,

The code unlocks the door to childhood. Can you see yourself little again?

regards,
al

Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks Lydia!

It's the boy in me. I have a panda, 5 feet tall, and its always about the wonder of being small again.

regards,
al

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Seems like a sly reference to the growing influence of China in this modern world. That great big panda that smiles and hugs. Yet is that hug genuine or all for show? That is the big question.

That is how i interpreted this write, Alfred. I might be way off. Either way, this is a very clever piece. Certainly one to think on. Nicely conceived.

Posted 6 Years Ago


so gone is the elephant, replaced by a panda... hmmm neverland will never be the same again... but then was it really ever friendly??? you probably need that "code" to know the answers.... nicely written Al...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Hmm....you can never be sure who hugs you. Unfortunately, some will hug you only to stab you in the back. I think there is a lot going on in this one, Al. Sounds like a cocktail party where the talk is small and the people not what they may seem. LydI***

Posted 6 Years Ago


and i like the hug of a teddy bear it signals comfort

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very deep and very pertaining to our modern times. I smile and bow to your talent my friend Al.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on July 13, 2018
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Tags: teddy, bear, neverland, hugging, soul

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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