in the carnival of hope

in the carnival of hope

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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popcorn please!

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in the carnival of hope

a carnival of hope Debbie rides the
ferris wheel to the sky,
popcorn celebrations smother our eyes
even the bad guys are smiling again
on a last chance bid to ring the bell
al’s heart soars to sound and swell
teddy bear kisses Debbie’s sweet lips
the carnival hopes all is well!

© 2018 Alfred Kukitz


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Thanks Donna!

Deb is big on the love list!

Regards,
Al

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is a very cute poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Young love at the carnival of dreams that sometimes do come true.

Posted 6 Years Ago


i like a hopeful poem it signals motivation and carnival is such a wonderful place to enjoy

Posted 6 Years Ago


A wonderful and hopeful poem. I liked the positive feel of the words and the places you took me. Thank you Alfred for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on June 11, 2018
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Tags: carnival, rides, wheel, msmile

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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