in the carnival of hope

popcorn please!

in the carnival of hope

a carnival of hope Debbie rides the
ferris wheel to the sky,
popcorn celebrations smother our eyes
even the bad guys are smiling again
on a last chance bid to ring the bell
al’s heart soars to sound and swell
teddy bear kisses Debbie’s sweet lips
the carnival hopes all is well!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Kelly!

I tickle inside. She can do that to me.
Regards
Al

[Kelly Scheppers]

I knew this was going to change your life somehow. I am soooo happy for you!

[Lydia Shutter]

Going to the carnival with a child....or a romantic interest....is a magical time. "popcorn celebrations"....love that phrase! As always, you bring us to the scene and allow us to share it with you, Al. Great write. Lydi**

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Sami!

It's about her, Debra, I'm in love at 69 years of age.

regards,
al

[Sami Khalil]

Love feels like a carnival of sorts, like a joy ride on the ferris wheel. Dear kisses , sweet lips and what more but a great company. Marvelous Al.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Aunt Astri,

not at all! I love the princess.

regards,
al

[Great Aunt Astri]

Sounds all love and sweetness , beautifully written. But the last line. 'the carnival hopes all is well' do I detect a bit of doubt creeping in?

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Coyote!

I am of warm & fuzzy!

Regards,
Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Sette!

You have to try the Ferris wheel to the sky.

Regards,
Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Dee!

I washed in sweetness that day!


Regards,
Al