Comic’s Land

Comic’s Land

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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come on jackson!

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Comic’s Land


There is hope here


one wonders over to the side view mirror


jeep in motion


jackson, my dog, his head jutting out the open window


i glance, hope fills my cup, but it dosen’t run over


i’m waiting, still waiting, for jackson’s joule


to catch the wind and flap away to comic’s land

© 2018 Alfred Kukitz


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thanks margie!

dogs in snow is another flavorful adventure!

regards,
al

Posted 6 Years Ago


The most detailed & relatable snippet of doggishness I've ever read! There are so many of these antics that make me smile every day at my own dogs. But you managed to capture one particular & unusual observation in such an uninhibited & slowly-revealing way that makes it very fun to read! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks Dinesh!

so much humor in animals!

regards,
al

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice piece of poetry Really enjoyed

Posted 6 Years Ago


My lab, Sammy, was good at it. What a laugh!

Thanks Jacob!

regards,
al

Posted 6 Years Ago


they look so cute and funny when that happens...
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on March 29, 2018
Last Updated on March 29, 2018
Tags: hope, jeep, joule, flap

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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