day none

day none

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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day none

murder
or just a few breaths left
torso blown out
lips swooning toward the moon
when the vapor comes
particles scatter
back to day none

© 2018 Alfred Kukitz


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thanks jacob!

i was thinking of ken, who recently died, and desiring to meet him in the vapor.

regards,
al

Posted 6 Years Ago


the murder of a life, by self-destruction or just nature...in the end of days, we go back to before day one, which is day none.

i really like all of these new writes so much.
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on January 27, 2018
Last Updated on January 27, 2018
Tags: murder, swooning, breaths, vapor

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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Yes, I'm still here. Just jazzing up my about me story. Sorry I don't die at the end. more..

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