The Loss of Morning Mind

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The Loss of the Morning Mind

The cartoon of morning shivers across my mind
Shaking brisk, feeling the thaw of laughter,
I hesitate a bit longer in my pause
look around, smell, feel the quiet running along your skin
Ok! It’s time to roar like hell
and have your mind lose its own mind.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

thanks Helena!

when i’m on the shores of poetry anything is possible.

regards,
al

[Alfred Kukitz]

thanks E!

after rising i looked for the lion.......couldn’t find him. oh well!

regards,
al

[Einstein Noodle]

hmmmmmmmmmmmm morning bed ...so hard to got up sometimes ..this:
"look around, smell, feel the quiet running along your skin " would definitely keep me under the cozy a bit longer ... i especially like the roar .. maybe i will try it tomorrow morning ... risk a sound clobbering from my slumbering Norma ;) might be worth it tho..after all if i roar i would be the King of the Jungle right?!
fine read ..glad i did not miss it
E.

[Helen Crutchett]

I once wrote a poem or a line once (can't remember which) that said "When my thoughts run astray." Reminded me of that. It's kind of like that in the morning waking....little thoughts spark across one's mind, until we regain our senses. Good job ! Thanks for sharing!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you Kelly!

There is in my smile upon your distance face a bounty of joy!

Regards,
Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you Emma!

Forever tickled in the soul on your visits!

Regards,
Al

[Kelly Scheppers]

The 4th line is utterly charming...just like you! ; )

[emmajoy]

' I hesitate a bit longer in my pause '

A romp of a thought-filled poem, metaphors sprinkled instead of rose petals. On your mark, get set... write!