Manning the Space Suit

Manning the Space Suit

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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Manning the Space Suit

Oblivion enters the mind
You float freely
Mind wandering into galaxies
Stars shaking hands with your mitt
You drift
Whoa!
Drift more
Oh the countless nothingness
inching into my soul.

© 2018 Alfred Kukitz


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Thanks Great Aunt Astri!

My dear lady I could sit a millennium and wander!

Regards,
Al

Posted 6 Years Ago


I can just feel what it must be like!. Beautifully written

Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks E!

Remember Bucky Fuller on his SpaceShip Earth. We are on the ride man!

Regards,
Al

Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks Jacob!

I always felt the universe starts at your feet. It’s space, isn’t it?

Regards,
Al

Posted 6 Years Ago


very clever ... the abruptness of expansion and contraction down and into the inner galaxies is mind tripping good! nice one big Al :)
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


good metaphor here....and coincidentally , just saw Apollo 13 again last week....thoughts float and it is like our being floating aimlessly with no gravity.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on January 7, 2018
Last Updated on January 7, 2018
Tags: Suit, Space, manning, drift

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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