A do, a diddle, a d and a Hum

A do, a diddle, a d and a Hum

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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A do, a diddle, a d and a hum

I wrestle with demons, I am a bum
My body’s here, my mind elsewhere
God only knows of diddle & hum.
Met me in a smile, wonder around my breath,
You may find me alive in my death.

I sit with small letters most of the day
The mister is misused so I leave it at bay
Like a Cummings poem I list myself thick
It is after all a little letters trick.

© 2017 Alfred Kukitz


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Thank You Sami!

I think you are my best poet friend and since I have read a ton of your impressive works you tickle my soul with these compliments.

Regards,
Al

Happy New Year!

Posted 6 Years Ago


You use small letters but they denote how wonderful and creative you are. This was so fresh and unique that it is admirable in all senses.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks Avani!

There are many more awaiting your beautiful eyes!

Regards,
Al

Posted 6 Years Ago


THIS IS SO AWESOME and very creative, I enjoyed this write. This is amazing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Thank you SilverInk!

It’s a bit about who I am. At 68 and alone, except for a wonderful dog, I find myself small among everyone else in the world.
The poet e.e.cummings uses small letter to spell his name, thus I allied with him.

Regards,
Al

Posted 6 Years Ago


Really enjoyable to read, not quite sure what is was about, though. I guess it depends more on the reader though!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on December 26, 2017
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Tags: Diddle, hum, demons, mister

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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Yes, I'm still here. Just jazzing up my about me story. Sorry I don't die at the end. more..

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