Eternal Forest

Eternal Forest

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
"

this is the walk

"

Eternal Forest

In the hollow of thought
I lay my head down
like a good good saint
I wait for a sound
should it be a bark
or a wag see me weep
my steps follow a forest
of furry friends
who find nectar
in the eternity of me.

© 2017 Alfred Kukitz


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Thanks Lydia!

We are in Maine and Jackson having a ball.

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


You are obviously a dog lover. I am sure your furry friends love you right back. Sweet write. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks SSR!

I often wonder how I could live without Jackson. Not well I'm sure!

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


Intriguing, i like it........
I also like dogs.....

Keep the good work

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks Tracey!

Upon dying I want to walk with all my dogs in the Eternal Forest. "Come Jackson, come Sam, come Blue, come Honey"!

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


Oh I love this.. the last line made it for me. We all in a way are each others nectar in this walk...

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on August 22, 2017
Last Updated on August 22, 2017
Tags: Hollow, thought, saint, wag

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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Yes, I'm still here. Just jazzing up my about me story. Sorry I don't die at the end. more..

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