Found

right in front of your nose

Found

A featured story makes its way into your heart.
Guided by your own genes you display a revelation
never discovered before in the history of mankind.
You melt into the story, capture a significance or two,
now you lay beside yourself wondering why it took
so long to find you?

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Emma,

Many things got in the way, sometimes even me.

Regards,
Al

[emmajoy]

Imagination lingers like the human spirit's twin.. waits to be found then.. simple, goes for it! For me your silk-smooth write displays a reflected dimension of the YOU. ..

'You melt into the story, .............' it took so long to find you?. '

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks E!

Are you having difficulty with this web page? I'm afraid we might lose some great writers, you among them.

Regards,
Al

[Einstein Noodle]

great stuff ...clever in presentation ..sound wisdom and in so few words ... blesses everyone and celebrates our uniqueness and our search for self .. but what i enjoy the most is how simple the closing is ... after all those struggles ..it's just that easy isn't it!?
E.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Rojas!

I often enjoy the things that I don't look for the most. It's like reading something.......then wondering........what isn't being said.

Regards,
Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks AprilRN!

I recall an epiphany, felt delighted, but until it traveled down the brain stem it wasn't fully recognized.

Regards,
Al

[Rojas]

The revelation that you are right where you need to be and the story was written when you weren't looking.

[AprilRN1210]

its like an epiphany wrapped into a poem! the ending sneaks up on you, but when you're done, its like ahhhhhh, I knew that! lol

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Astri!

Some writers have trouble with the web site. Are you having any difficulty?

Regards,
Al

[Great Aunt Astri]

Yes, often the best things are right there in front of your nose. Sometimes we can't see them, for looking! You are right, we need them to find us! Lovely poem with deep thoughts.