Ever So Sweetly

Ever So Sweetly

A Story by Alfred Kukitz
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Normal Glucose range 70 - 120 Normal A1C 80 - 125

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Ever So Sweetly

"What was his blood sugar", asked Pop. The doctor reported a 688 shortly after they found him laying what seemed like an upside down position. Last we heard his A1C test came in the 700's, the discarded wrappings of Godiva chocolates laid bare to that fact. You could say he found God through candy.
"My god! What happened?" Pop seemed perplexed his mind reeling in the sweet afterlife of the present moment.
"He went all the way Pop. Candy Mountain, the Everest for Diabetes, without oxygen, hiking boots or any sophisticated gear."
"Oh Doris I'm so sorry. What was his name, I can't remember it now for some reason."
Doris kept staring at Greg thinking to herself how sweet he must be, his bodily fluids sugar coated in some of the best chocolate in the universe.

© 2017 Alfred Kukitz


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Thanks Moon's Fairest Daughter!

Having a bit of fun with my inheritance from Agent Orange.

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


This sounds to me like a twisted way of saying-
"Find what you love, and let it kill you! "
I really loved the last line....best way to end it..

Posted 7 Years Ago


No No Barleygirl!

I was with a friend we both have diabetes and I wanted to satirize our disease just to illicit a laugh.

regards,
al

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is very bizarre! I found myself wishing it went on for a bit longer, tho! Your imagination is very crazy fun unexpected freaky and I like that in a writer! *wink! wink!* I was kinda expecting there to be a name for this guy that would speak to the sugar thing . . . like remember the comedian John Candy who kinda went the same way as you're describing here? Maybe this is ABOUT John Candy & I'm just now realizing that. I've always been a bit dense around nuanced writing! (((HUGS)))

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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Yes, I'm still here. Just jazzing up my about me story. Sorry I don't die at the end. more..

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