Time

whoa

Time

Smoked by hands of a clock's dial
You pull the bed sheets down and
morning arrives before you enter the bed
The curtains pulled at the opening of day
just as night waves it the end of the day
You feel a need to freeze time still
to catch its essence by way of forced will
but eternity grabs your mind bent in time
and always whispers that time is much bigger in size.

Reviews

[Latifa]

but eternity grabs your mind bent in time

we are in our truest sense eternal and timeless.
much enjoyed Alfred :) :) :)

[Sami Khalil]

You have summed it up marvelously. It feels like the wheels of time moves in no regards to anyone or our forced will as if it has its own bigger will...Excellent, sir...:)..............

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Jacob!

My genius friend I bow in humble appreciation.

Regards,
Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks J!

It a whisper to myself I am among a giant here!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we are just a small glitch in time...a few minutes, a few seconds, part of the dial that moves our lives.

love this...and nice use of near rhyme ---

j.

[J Todd Underhill]

Stunning write fro such brevity I am thankful for the support you lend, know I am a fan of you work!