Did You Lose a Tooth?

Did You Lose a Tooth?

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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Did You Lose a Tooth

I'd like to ruin you
down a staircase of laughter
See some drool manifest from your grin
Perhaps lose a tooth or two
as we face each other chin to chin.

© 2016 Alfred Kukitz


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Thank you Lua!

A bit of comedic madness, as a former nurse, you discover this in the madness of health care.

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


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lua
the insanity this holds is absolutely endearing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks YumnaKay!

Open wide please!

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


Somehow I found this funny.. Being a dental student that's the question we ask most often from the patients.. Nice to see this portrayed like this! I enjoyed reading this 😊

Posted 7 Years Ago


No no! I'm not interested in violence.

Thanks for stopping!

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


Do you mean you want to be the one that helps him lose that tooth? Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on December 15, 2016
Last Updated on December 15, 2016
Tags: Tooth, laughter, staircase, grin

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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Yes, I'm still here. Just jazzing up my about me story. Sorry I don't die at the end. more..

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