Reckless Gait
A Poem by
Alfred Kukitz
are you drunk again?
yes, in tears and shadows!
Reckless Gait
I am of tears and shadows in reckoning with myself,
i see my blindness trying to kiss the sky,
of all that is real i’m dumbfounded
merrily in sadness i try for what is real
there are stories on my breast of tears and shadows
the gloom of appeal stamped on consciousness
my body lost in the embodiment of sleep
i wander…………………….here…………there
aimlessly walking to my own despair.
© 2016 Alfred Kukitz
Reviews
Thanks Lydia!
I wrote something named Fallen. I'm really scared for today's youth. The candidates, country and the world are all valid fears.
Regards,
Al
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Absolutely....we live in scary times globally and personally as we age.
Thanks Ana,
Fell today, incurred pain, at least a 5 or 6 pain on the pain scale. 10 the worst. Talk about my poem entertaining vision. Wow.......but it still hurts!
Regards,
Al
Posted 8 Years Ago
Thanks Ana,
Fell today, incurred pain, at least a 5 or 6 pain on the pain scale. 10 the worst. Talk about my poem entertaining vision. Wow.......but it still hurts!
Regards,
Al
Oh, reckoning with oneself is the most difficult evaluation we ever have to make. We see ourselves as older, more feeble, more unworthy than others see us. Then we go to sleep.....and we dream. Not always pleasant dreams. What will become of us? Shadows darken in difficult times, but the truth is, the sun is never far. What an emotional introspective write this is, Al. Well written. Lydi**
Posted 8 Years Ago
Oh, reckoning with oneself is the most difficult evaluation we ever have to make. We see ourselves as older, more feeble, more unworthy than others see us. Then we go to sleep.....and we dream. Not always pleasant dreams. What will become of us? Shadows darken in difficult times, but the truth is, the sun is never far. What an emotional introspective write this is, Al. Well written. Lydi**
It's often these fantasies that keep us moving and thinking positive.
It's good to hold hope, even in hopeless situations.
Posted 8 Years Ago
It's often these fantasies that keep us moving and thinking positive.
It's good to hold hope, even in hopeless situations.
Thanks Jacob!
I have 2 knee replacements, 2 hip replacements and walking, at times, feels the strangeness of balance.
Regards,
Al
Posted 8 Years Ago
Thanks Jacob!
I have 2 knee replacements, 2 hip replacements and walking, at times, feels the strangeness of balance.
Regards,
Al
better to stay in the fantasies...reality is just too harsh these days...and the hangover is very uncomfortable and sad.
Posted 8 Years Ago
better to stay in the fantasies...reality is just too harsh these days...and the hangover is very uncomfortable and sad.
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Alfred Kukitz Deering, NH
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Yes, I'm still here. Just jazzing up my about me story. Sorry I don't die at the end.
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