One Look

One Look

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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dots in the o's please

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One Look

One look upon the world
and you see forever
In its breath
In its stature
In the miracle
that speaks to our eyes

© 2016 Alfred Kukitz


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Hey Bacchus!

You wonder women. Thanks for stopping.

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


it is my constant prayer
that my eyes will be opened
forever
great look into a look that matters most

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thanks Paul!

Try this, embrace a huge forest of trees, you know when home arrives.

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


Yes so true. When you get out of the concrete jungle, and see this great world we live in, it really is awesome.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thanks KL,

When you think of a small sphere in the universe, the evolution of species, the wonders of DNA and us, here, sharing our mind and soul. I'd say this is quite a miracle.

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thanks Pryde!

Only sometimes it takes a while before the lamp of seeing goes on.

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thanks Ana!

Wanna play some B ball? I'll put my sneakers on too!

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's ten p.m. with a symphony of crickets singing in the background. I just listened closely.

Thanks Jacob!

Regards,
Al



Posted 8 Years Ago


many go through life, with eyes wide shut...

and the miracle is lost on them.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dots in the o's.
I like that. I like what this poem says too.
Open your eyes, don't dot them.
See.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on August 7, 2016
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Tags: Miracle, forever, breath, stature

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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