Home of Birth

Home of Birth

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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Home of Birth

A wave of indiscretions,
Weather flowing into the likes of mankind
Someone running short of borrowed time
Bodies smoldering in the heat of night
The plank, walking the plank to eternity,
Oh.......the whisper shaking your bliss upside down
All said its a normal day on Earth
Beauty, horror, life, death, fiction, fantasy,
All the qualities that make for life's home of birth.

© 2016 Alfred Kukitz


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Oh the bandit as Racoon!

Thank you for visiting! I try my best to be of substance and voice.

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a very powerful write!!! Brilliance

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thank you KL!

It is but a brief word of my mind that I know is kissing the souls of WC.

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hi Pryde!

Thank you! I still don't know which is more enchanting, your face or your writing?

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thank you Mary!

It's quite a place if you consider it in the context of a small sphere in the middle of nowhere.

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thanks E!

Today is tendinitis of my right wrist. The burn joins many of the attributes of life on Earth but small compared with all the suffering in the world.

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


Powerless we are against the whims of nature and the world, we just try to carve out our own little space and hunker down.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Life is but a poor player who struts and frets ... reminder of the Scottish play with the sone. Love to read your writes:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


excellent write! global synopsis of a day in the life of humanity- well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


how very original ..wrapping all that humanity and reflecting it on earth as the place of birth ..very fine read for me ..good stuff! we should all consider it ..do some soul searching introspection :)
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on June 22, 2016
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Tags: Mankind, bodies, bliss, earth

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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