Entity

Hmm

Entity

The occipital of imagination
Back door logic
No lights only starlight scope vision
You enter without feet
You enter without fear
Here you find the greens of the heavens
Sparkling with stars and neurons like a
universe of you and I squashed into a single entity.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Doodley! We used a starlight scope in the Army. One can see objects in the night. The stars are brilliant!

Regards,
Al

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The joining of two souls, in love, into a single being.

This is a profound poem, Alfred. Weaved delicately, beautifully worded, and leaving its message open to interpretation to the reader.

Very well done!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Occipital is the back of the head, hence, back door logic. I wanted you to feel the bigness of yourself allied with your own universe.

Thanks for the visit!

Regards,
Al

[highonwords]

what a brilliant poem - i'm just not sure about the word 'occipital', if it's reader-friendly, it somehow smudges the opening brilliant effect of the poem, but otherwise this is exceptional

my best,
steph

[Alfred Kukitz]

I'll put some butter in with the squash. We will have a feast!

Thanks Jacob!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love this..."squashed into a single entity"

love...and to be able to enter without feet, great...because feet tend to get cold pretty easily.

j.