A Breath of Venom

she kills love

A Breath of Venom

When the sorrows lay me to sleep
My cries return in your folded arms
A phantom of love once gone
You breathe an unscented venom
I shall inhale my whole life.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

It was, to say the least, quite a turn around. I flew back in October after leaving at the end of June. She was radiant, glowing, perpetual joy emanating from her soul when she knew I was returning for 3 months.

Thanks FT!

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Phantom love lingers forever - a perpetual venom for one whose heart was broken... well-done, Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

This is a Croatian women, Jelena, who said, "I love you more" whenever I told her I loved her. What an unusual experience!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the black widow...catches us in her web, we feel safe within the netting, and then she stings us...and that pain stays with us the rest of our lives...can't take a breath without inhaling it....we are the fly.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hi Sweetie!

I missed you too. I wonder whether any of us will ever meet, like a WC get together. Thanks for stopping by.

Regards ,
Al

[Moonie]

I reckon I had a dream once that there was this huge WC get together in Paris--yep Paris, just to add a little more magic.... and everyone was there. I wish we could do that..

[Alfred Kukitz]

I'm going to France this year in October. Lourdes for the healing waters; Normandy to visit my uncle's grave. wanna come?

[Moonie]

Aww, I wish I could come, Al... but that would be too difficult for me... :(
France sounds great! I wish you all the best for your journey!!! :)))))

[Alfred Kukitz]

Barcelona too! Thanks!

[Moonie]

Oh wow!!! Love, love, love the last two lines. :)
Your writing is magical, Al!!!! Missed you during my WC sabbatical.